Sunday Best: the looking glass

Dear reader,

Welcome to October here on Free Verse Revolution! A few spaces remain so please check the submissions page if you are considering submitting.

Catch up on this week’s pieces:

Tuesday – Ingrid

Wednesday – Candice Louisa Daquin

Thursday – Frances Spurrier

Friday – Elena Maria Mana-ay Parcon

Saturday – Megha Sood

This week’s prompt was ‘the looking glass’, below are the top three responses:

Through the Glass – Lynn White

Alice saw herself in her looking glass
and walked through
into a topsy turvy world where
everything was back to front and inside out.
She drifted into a dreamscape
of madness and unreality,
without breaking the glass.
Uncut by the shards of her mirror
or the place she entered into.
She had only to wake to make
things the right way round again.

But walking through a clear glass,
a transparent window,
it would have been different.
Her reflection would float
towards a place where everything
seemed the right way round.
Where everything made sense
and added up sweet with reason.
A place without madness,
which looked easy to enter
and had no sharp edges.

But this glass forms an invisible barrier
to the other side and the life
that seduces and entices her.
And to get through she has to break the glass,
whose sharp edges cut her
and propel her crazily into a place
where she cannot wake.
A jagged, topsy turvy place
where everything spins round wildly.
Where caricatures of humanity scream out
trying to make sense of it.

Front to back and outside in.
Everything is the wrong way round again.

Happy writing!


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